{"id":2237,"date":"2025-09-02T04:49:42","date_gmt":"2025-09-02T04:49:42","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/www.burcutarhan.com\/?p=2237"},"modified":"2025-09-02T04:49:44","modified_gmt":"2025-09-02T04:49:44","slug":"hikayenin-5-asamasi","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.burcutarhan.com\/?p=2237","title":{"rendered":"Hikayenin 5 A\u015famas\u0131"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-center\">Hemen hemen b\u00fct\u00fcn hik\u00e2yelerin anlatt\u0131\u011f\u0131m\u0131z veya anlatmaya gerek duymad\u0131\u011f\u0131m\u0131z be\u015f a\u015famas\u0131 olur.\u00a0<br>1.\u00a0Tetikleyici olay\u00a0<br>2.\u00a0Giderek artan zorunluluk<br>3.\u00a0Kriz<br>4.\u00a0Zirve<br>5.\u00a0\u00c7\u00f6z\u00fcm\u00a0<br>\u00a0<br>Bunlar bir hikayenin a\u015famalar\u0131d\u0131r. Tetikleyici olay\u0131, krizi ve \u00e7\u00f6z\u00fcm\u00fc anlatmadan bir hikaye kuramay\u0131z ama giderek artan zorunluluk veya zirveyi ge\u00e7ebiliriz. Bu da edebiyat derslerinde \u00f6\u011frendi\u011fimiz serim-d\u00fc\u011f\u00fcm-\u00e7\u00f6z\u00fcm \u00fc\u00e7l\u00fcs\u00fcd\u00fcr. Ama iyi bir hikaye hele sinema filmi hikayesiyse gederek artan zorunlulu\u011fu ve zirveyi de i\u00e7ermelidir.\u00a0<br>\u00a0<br>Bu a\u015famalar\u0131 s\u0131ras\u0131yla anlatabilece\u011fimiz gibi kar\u0131\u015f\u0131k bir s\u0131rayla da anlatabiliriz. Yani tetikleyici olayla de\u011fil krizle de ba\u015flatabiliriz. Veya \u00e7\u00f6z\u00fcm\u00fc ya da hikayenin finalini anlat\u0131p karakteri bu sonuca getiren \u015feyin ba\u015f\u0131na d\u00f6nebiliriz.\u00a0<br>\u00a0<br>A\u015fa\u011f\u0131daki tetikleyici olayla birlikte, di\u011fer d\u00f6rt a\u015famay\u0131 i\u00e7eren bir hikaye kurun. \u00a0\u00a0<br><em>&#8216;Orta ya\u015fl\u0131 iyi g\u00f6r\u00fcn\u00fcml\u00fc bir adam bir g\u00f6kdelenin g\u00fcvenlik b\u00f6l\u00fcm\u00fcne gelir, g\u00f6revlilere bir \u015fey s\u00f6yler, kap\u0131lar a\u00e7\u0131l\u0131r ve adam g\u00fcvenlikten ge\u00e7er, asans\u00f6re biner, 30. katta iner, b\u00fcy\u00fck bir toplant\u0131 odas\u0131na girer, i\u00e7erde yirmi ki\u015fi vard\u0131r. Adam birden bir tabanca \u00e7\u0131kar\u0131r, yirmi ki\u015fi panikle hareketlenir.&#8217; <\/em>Buradan itibaren hikayeyi devam ettirin.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<hr class=\"wp-block-separator has-alpha-channel-opacity\"\/>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>D\u00f6rt taraf\u0131 cam duvarl\u0131, i\u00e7erisi g\u00fcne\u015f \u0131\u015f\u0131\u011f\u0131 ile dolmu\u015f toplant\u0131 odas\u0131nda her \u015fey s\u0131radand\u0131. Geni\u015f maun masan\u0131n etraf\u0131nda toplanm\u0131\u015f yirmi ki\u015filik ekibin k\u0131yafetleri d\u0131\u015f\u0131nda d\u00fcnden farklar\u0131 yoktu, muhtemelen yar\u0131ndan da olmayacakt\u0131. A\u00e7\u0131lm\u0131\u015f ve her an not almaya haz\u0131r defterler, sunum dosyalar\u0131, son anda yap\u0131lan revizeler nedenli bilgisayar klavyelerinin t\u0131k\u0131rt\u0131lar\u0131, kahve bardaklar\u0131, kendi aralar\u0131ndaki u\u011fultulu konu\u015fmalar\u2026 \u00c7al\u0131\u015ft\u0131klar\u0131 ajans\u0131n ba\u015fkan\u0131 gelince toplant\u0131 ba\u015flayacakt\u0131.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tam bu s\u0131rada, toplant\u0131 odas\u0131n\u0131n kap\u0131s\u0131 bir h\u0131\u015f\u0131mla itildi. Odaya giren ki\u015fiyi hi\u00e7biri tan\u0131mad\u0131\u011f\u0131 i\u00e7in t\u00fcm g\u00f6zler siyah tak\u0131m elbiseli adama \u00e7evrilirken, b\u00fcy\u00fck ve h\u0131zl\u0131 ad\u0131mlarla odan\u0131n ortas\u0131na kadar gelmi\u015fti adam. Oldu\u011fu yerde durdu. \u015ea\u015fk\u0131n bak\u0131\u015flara ald\u0131rmadan, hi\u00e7bir kelime etmeden, y\u00fcz\u00fcnde kararl\u0131 bir ifade ile elini ceketinin arkas\u0131na uzatt\u0131 ve belinden bir anda par\u0131lt\u0131s\u0131 g\u00f6z al\u0131c\u0131 bir tabanca ortaya \u00e7\u0131kard\u0131.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Herkes \u015fok olmu\u015ftu. Odadaki s\u0131radan hava, yerini; \u015fa\u015fk\u0131nl\u0131k ve b\u00fcy\u00fcm\u00fc\u015f g\u00f6zlere b\u0131rakt\u0131.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tabancan\u0131n kendilerine do\u011frultulmas\u0131yla birlikte, bir anda i\u00e7erideki g\u00fcnl\u00fck g\u00fcne\u015flik hava buz kesti. Ne oldu\u011funu ya da adam\u0131n kim oldu\u011funu anlamamalar\u0131na ra\u011fmen, herkes can havli ile akl\u0131na ilk gelen \u015feyi yapt\u0131; kimileri sandalyesini devirerek masan\u0131n alt\u0131na sakland\u0131, kimileri nefes nefese kal\u0131p elinde her ne varsa yere d\u00fc\u015f\u00fcrd\u00fc, kimileri yerinden milim dahi k\u0131m\u0131ldayamad\u0131, kimileri bo\u011faz\u0131 d\u00fc\u011f\u00fcmlenirken dua okumaya ba\u015flad\u0131, kimileri ise kurtulma \u00fcmidi ile kap\u0131ya ko\u015ftu.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Kap\u0131 kilitliydi.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Odada ortak olan tek \u015fey kalpleri a\u011f\u0131zlar\u0131nda atan, nefes almaya bile cesaret edemeyen ayn\u0131 \u015firkette \u00e7al\u0131\u015fan 20 ki\u015fiydi. Oda cehenneme d\u00f6nm\u00fc\u015ft\u00fc.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Adam p\u0131r\u0131l p\u0131r\u0131l bir Sig Sauer P320\u2019yi havaya kald\u0131rd\u0131. Kap\u0131ya ko\u015fanlara bakarak \u2018Herkes yerine\u2019 diye ba\u011f\u0131rd\u0131. Sonra da odaya d\u00f6n\u00fcp \u2018Hepiniz sandalyelerinize oturun\u2019 diye ekledi. G\u00f6zlerindeki kararl\u0131l\u0131k, tehlikenin b\u00fcy\u00fckl\u00fc\u011f\u00fcn\u00fc hayk\u0131r\u0131yordu.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Herkes tekrar masan\u0131n etraf\u0131nda yerini ald\u0131ktan namluyu \u00e7al\u0131\u015fanlara y\u00f6nlendirdi. 30 ya\u015flar\u0131nda bir kad\u0131n titreyerek aya\u011fa kalkt\u0131 ve y\u00fcz\u00fc s\u0131r\u0131ls\u0131klam yalvarmaya ba\u015flad\u0131: \u2018L\u00fctfen \u00e7\u0131kay\u0131m, yeni do\u011fum yapt\u0131m, evlad\u0131m var, emziriyorum.\u2019 Adam y\u00fcz\u00fcnde so\u011fukkanl\u0131l\u0131k ve buz gibi bir metal ses ile cevap verdi kad\u0131na: \u2018Otur yerine\u2019 Herkesin korkusu daha da derinle\u015fti.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Gazetelerde 3-5 saniye g\u00f6z at\u0131p, sayfay\u0131 \u00e7evirdikleri haberlerdeki gibiydi sanki durumlar\u0131. Ak\u0131llar\u0131ndan ayn\u0131 c\u00fcmleler ge\u00e7iyordu: \u2018Bu adam bir manyak, hepimiz \u00f6lece\u011fiz ve Allah kahretsin buradan \u00e7\u0131k\u0131\u015f yok.\u2019\u00a0\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Tam bu umutsuzlu\u011fun ortas\u0131nda, odan\u0131n kilitli kap\u0131s\u0131 ajans ba\u015fkan\u0131 taraf\u0131ndan \u2018tak\u2019 diye ard\u0131na kadar a\u00e7\u0131ld\u0131. Ajans ba\u015fkan\u0131n\u0131n i\u00e7eri girmesi, dev projeksiyon cihaz\u0131n\u0131n a\u00e7\u0131lmas\u0131, odadaki siyah tak\u0131m elbiseli adam\u0131n tabancay\u0131 masaya b\u0131rakmas\u0131 benzer zamanlarda oldu. Perdenin dev ekranda tek bir c\u00fcmle vard\u0131: \u201cGer\u00e7ek korku, unutulmazd\u0131r.\u201d<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Ajans ba\u015fkan\u0131 yaz\u0131n\u0131n tam \u00f6n\u00fcnde durdu ve korkudan buz kesmi\u015f, bombo\u015f g\u00f6zlerle kendisine bakan ekibi ile konu\u015fmaya ba\u015flad\u0131. \u2018Arkada\u015flar, az \u00f6nce deneyimledi\u011finiz kurgu, yeni m\u00fc\u015fterimiz i\u00e7in haz\u0131rlad\u0131\u011f\u0131m kampanya fikriydi. Korkuyu, \u015fa\u015fk\u0131nl\u0131\u011f\u0131, adrenalin patlamas\u0131n\u0131 iliklerinize kadar hissettiniz. \u015eimdi sizden beklentim, yerlerinize gidin ve hedef kitlesine tam da bu hisleri ya\u015fatacak bir i\u00e7erik \u00e7al\u0131\u015f\u0131n. B\u0131kt\u0131m art\u0131k s\u0131k\u0131c\u0131, kli\u015fe, eskimi\u015f fikirlerinizden.\u2019\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Siyah tak\u0131m elbiseli adam y\u00fcz\u00fcnde en ufak bir ifade de\u011fi\u015fikli\u011fi olmadan masan\u0131n \u00fczerindeki tabancay\u0131 ald\u0131, ceketini d\u00fczeltti ve ajans ba\u015fkan\u0131 ile birlikte odadan \u00e7\u0131kt\u0131lar.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Kap\u0131 kapan\u0131nca kimse yerinden k\u0131p\u0131rdayamad\u0131; herkes donmu\u015ftu. Ajans\u0131n \u201cyarat\u0131c\u0131l\u0131k\u201d ad\u0131 alt\u0131nda yapt\u0131rd\u0131\u011f\u0131 bu sahne bitmi\u015fti, evet ama o an fark ettiler ki, ya\u015fad\u0131klar\u0131 \u015fey bir \u201cfikir\u201d de\u011fil, art\u0131k ruhlar\u0131na kaz\u0131nm\u0131\u015f bir travmayd\u0131.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p class=\"text-justify\">Hemen hemen b\u00fct\u00fcn hik\u00e2yelerin anlatt\u0131\u011f\u0131m\u0131z veya anlatmaya gerek duymad\u0131\u011f\u0131m\u0131z be\u015f a\u015famas\u0131 olur.\u00a01.\u00a0Tetikleyici olay\u00a02.\u00a0Giderek artan zorunluluk3.\u00a0Kriz4.\u00a0Zirve5.\u00a0\u00c7\u00f6z\u00fcm\u00a0\u00a0Bunlar bir hikayenin a\u015famalar\u0131d\u0131r. 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